slices of life and pieces of thought
I like! So identifiable.
The desolation in your stripped, bare lines go so well with the bleak image of the winter tree reassuring itself with dreams of spring :)
@Aduhi, i thought you were not supposed to like poems :)@Calliopia, you read so well.
I like the ones like this, simple and easy to read, which I can easily understand without having to scratch my head and I don't have to try and figure out what in the name of love it is all about.
To be honest,poetry writing is not really my cup of tea. I guess I will never be able to write down what I exactly feel. this is why, i really appreciate your efforts and the quality of your work..!!
@Feddabonn, hmm.@Epistomology, different people, different tastes and different abilities. 'Variety is the spice of life.'
Lovely, as usual, and all the more so because of the brevity. I'm still disappointed at my kids for not making more of an effort to meet you. I guess the whole train trip thing was a bit daunting for them. I hope we can still do a meet anytime you are up here.
@Daydreambeliever, thanks, thanks. I do hope we can meet some time, may be on my next trip to Aizawl though i don't know when. The kids would have wanted more fun, naturally, quite understantable.
I like too.
@Illusionaire, thanks, you sure have good taste [lol]
epistemology but not "Epistomology"..just kidd!! march thla hian mumbai ka lo kal mai thei..mumbai Univ ah presentation ka nei a..
nice short catchy
@epistomology, wow! Pawn lam mi rawn ngaihthlak ve an phal angem?
@ Keichala, easy to read through, isn't it?@ Mimi, thanks.
Fere ri rein,Saruak leh inhawngin,Thlasik thli vawt hnuaiah,A vawt, ka khur hlawk hlawk.Sirva pawh kiang zo ta!Mahse nipui a lo thaw ang a,Hnah tharin min tuam leh ang;Chuti'n ka par a vul leh ang..Hehe.. te han ti vel ila.. Hei chu, 'tawi si, tha si..' an tih ang chi a nih awm hi!!
@Zaia, i thiam lutuk. Thanks.
I first thought, you stood naked! It got me right a little bit later! Ha ha! Poor me!I then began to like it!
@Markwood, you were trying to be too literal haha! Thanks for readng through even after that :)
Wow! Nice. Enjoyed it! :-)
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